https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c1-s9ISKok4
The feedback that stood out to me was to show more emotion in my voice when I spoke. This time around, I decided to stand up and try to move around to incite more emotion in my voice. I also tried to sound more excited.
Agatha, excellent work on your elevator pitch #2 posted above! I like how you took your comments seriously from before and directly implemented them into your new video. Great work up above
ReplyDeleteHey Agatha! Great job on elevator pitch number two! I think you did a good job of evaluating your feedback and figuring out what you needed to fix such as your emotion and enthusiasm. You showed this improvement in your new elevator pitch. By walking around it keeps the audience on their toes and more interested in what you are saying.
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